Sands Intro and Book Cover

Today I made a book cover for my story Sands about a boy named Hugo Aswary. the reason I choose this book cover is it is sad ( In my opinion) and it represents the land and the story well. we also looked at some other covers to like It and dragon blade just to name a few.

I have been writing sands for about a month but I wrote the intro which is down below. Please give me feedback.

 

Sands

Intro 

 

6 years ago the pandemic came. The thing was that it did not affect people. The pandemic affected plants. Once it wiped out the plants. It came after people, animals became mutated and after three years there was only a ¼ of the population left; this is where our story starts in 2256 in the great ditch or as you know it the grand canyon. The pandemic started all I remember is trees withering, scientists stumbling to find a cure but we all knew that this was the end of our race. once the trees had gone, it came for us. People hid in their houses but it was impossible to run from it. My parents were part of those people all I remember was them spewing up blood and guts everything and everyone died. Thousands of people died every week. My name is Hugo Aswary. When I was 6 when the pandemic came.

Action Stations

Today from 12:45 to 1:45 we did Action Stations, I did world building first we talked about fantasy/Sci fi worlds other people have made. My favorite  thing was when we got to draw a place in our world. we got to watch videos and look  real places in our world. Next time I am looking forward to working more on my world and getting to draw the map I think we are doing that next time.

Sphero

I worked with George We programmed a Equilateral and a right angle triangle 

The most difficult part Programming the equilaterals angles we ended up having the angles 0°, 120° and 240°

We had to debug the program by Changing the angles a lot like a lot each time it did not work we would change the angles  

It took about 6 times to have success. We used a lot of Resilience because of how many times it took to get is right

Sands passions

What I am doing to achieve my goals?

Wright a story. I am going to ask people like it

What am I going to do to measure progress

I am going to ask if people like it and tally it up 

I did not have time to tally it up but the bit I wrote was good. This is a one time thing because I do painting most of the time.

for literacy today we made a franken store here is what we did

The murderer who smelt like an old granny

His skin was as cold as ice, And his hair was as thin as a piece of paper. His eyes glowed like stars in the dark. His fingers were long and old they looked like raisins.

He’s voice sounds as husky as the whole universe with the cold and emotionless making you want to shiver when you hear it.

He smelt like an old granny and had cobwebs around him, he also smelt musty and had bad odour which made him smell very bad and didn’t seem to have had a shower in many years.

He has leathery skin with greasy oily hair, his suit feels refined and silky. He feels quite old and frail as well like if you touch him he would evaporate.

He was stirring his potion in his secret room, a room that was filled with cobwebs and rats, you have to get through layers of traps, if you made it you could be happy but if you get found, you will get put into a nappy, he makes his potions inside of a cauldron, he sticks his fingers in to test if it is warm or cold, he is very creepy and gets to lots of trouble, but if he gets found by the monsters of the dark, he would get ripped apart.

I was in the top 3 for the title round